Example Question–
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Free social service should be a compulsory part of high school education or not is a hot topic for debate. However, many people think unpaid community is an option for teenager in high school, I convinced that it must be a compulsory part.
The first and the most important reason is social services improve many necessary skills. some activities like working for a charity make student become good at teamwork and special ability that even they don’t know like how to organize a charity music show or how to prepare a dinner for old people, patient in the hospital with their classmate. Moreover, teenager can discover themselves and try to creative something that they have never imagine before. it will be useful for them in their career later.
In addition, we can force student raise the social awareness. Nowadays, it is seem like teenager pay attention and spend time to some attractive thing like gossip on Facebook, post photos on Instagram, or play some useless games. unpaid working for our social remind them what they have, what they need to do and how they do their quest. improving the neighbourhood or clean the trash to protect the environment make young boys and girls realize they what to do to maintain our life environment.
Last but not lead, community service can help children become more and more mature. Instead of think how to have beautiful selfie photos or how to pass a stage in some game, teenager will think about their future, not only for themselves but also for the country where they live and the next generation. they will understand how hard the life is that become the motivation for them to have a sympathy for everything their parents provide for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...services improve many necessary skills. some activities like working for a charity m...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'imagined'.
Suggestion: imagined
...creative something that they have never imagine before. it will be useful for them in ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...g that they have never imagine before. it will be useful for them in their career...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...e the social awareness. Nowadays, it is seem like teenager pay attention and spend t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unpaid
... Instagram, or play some useless games. unpaid working for our social remind them what...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Improving
...need to do and how they do their quest. improving the neighbourhood or clean the trash to...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...here they live and the next generation. they will understand how hard the life is th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84931506849 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46430703392 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2482952997 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254963011805 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975235254434 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795998155777 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177270649391 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902336123078 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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