It is a fact that use of certain languages in some country are increasing now a days while others are declining .The very intention of this essay is to discuss both views and to tend finally is it positive or negative trend.
Initially some languages use more in some country because it improves the communication and finally affects the education level of people ,for example ,people who reside in UK speaks English compared to other languages
On the other hand ,there is decline in the use of other languages. To clarify ,it may leads to disappearance of certain culture and traditions.To site an example languages like Kongini and others are dissappears.
However ,I can conclude that it has a positive impact on people life because use is completely depend upon the development of the nation.finally it improves communication much easier.
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Essay evaluation report
It is a fact that use of certain languages in some country are increasing now a days
It is a fact that the use of certain languages in some countries is increasing now a days
and others are dissappears.
and others are disappearing.
because use is completely depend upon
because the use is completely depending upon
because the use completely depends upon
Sentence: To clarify ,it may leads to disappearance of certain culture and traditions.To site an example languages like Kongini and others are dissappears.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to may and leads
Sentence: To clarify ,it may leads to disappearance of certain culture and traditions.To site an example languages like Kongini and others are dissappears.
Error: dissappears Suggestion: disappears
flaws:
No. of Words: 141 350
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 141 350
No. of Characters: 690 1500
No. of Different Words: 86 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.446 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.894 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.885 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.826 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.516 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.885 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is a fact that use of certain languages in some country are increasing...
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Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...anguages in some country are increasing now a days while others are declining .The very in...
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Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng now a days while others are declining .The very intention of this essay is to d...
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Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... now a days while others are declining .The very intention of this essay is to disc...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally is it positive or negative trend. Initially some languages use more in som...
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Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some languages use more in some country because it improves the communication an...
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Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ly affects the education level of people ,for example ,people who reside in UK spe...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e education level of people ,for example ,people who reside in UK speaks English c...
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Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eaks English compared to other languages On the other hand ,there is decline in t...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... On the other hand ,there is decline in the use of other lan...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n the use of other languages. To clarify ,it may leads to disappearance of certain...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...rance of certain culture and traditions.To site an example languages like Kongini ...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o site an example languages like Kongini and others are dissappears. ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e Kongini and others are dissappears. However ,I can conclude that it has a po...
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Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... However ,I can conclude that it has a positive i...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r ,I can conclude that it has a positive impact on people life because use is com...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on people life because use is completely depend upon the development of the nati...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... people life because use is completely depend upon the development of the nation.fin...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... completely depend upon the development of the nation.finally it improves commun...
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Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nation.finally it improves communication much easier.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268456375839 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.154362416107 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0738255033557 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0671140939597 0.0501214627716 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0469798657718 0.0437548338989 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134228187919 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0201342281879 0.0403226058552 50% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.9483565121 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335570469799 0.0326793684256 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10067114094 0.0861772015684 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0134228187919 0.021408717616 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00671140939597 0.011925033212 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 920.0 1933.35771543 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 140.0 316.048096192 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.57142857143 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 4.20517956788 82% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.392857142857 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321428571429 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178571428571 0.203846283523 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128571428571 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9483565121 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.037074148 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 52.5451173764 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0891783567 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.7743622355 168% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2964109879 49.517814964 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 230.0 127.492653851 180% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7743622355 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.814263465372 246% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 3.99599198397 501% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 67.1428571429 49.1944974215 136% => OK
Elegance: 1.575 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32747875338 0.332605444948 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.155690031781 0.102741220458 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0993831837795 0.0668466124924 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.848079752091 0.534860350844 159% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197752054276 0.148594505496 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206327512171 0.134430193775 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132509609201 0.0742795772207 178% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.239179724026 0.324371583561 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.063738580988 0.0638462369009 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216311355028 0.228012699653 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123384623647 0.058150111329 212% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 10.4468937876 38% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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