Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In many regions in the world, fresh water is a paramountly important, yet scarce resource. For example, a vast majority of African people are living with insufficient clean water sources. Furthermore, as the needs of water are increasing sharply, the problem seems to become universal. In this essay, I will give some explanations for the rising demand of water and the measures that could be taken to address the issue.
There are some major factors which contribute to the rise in the global water usage. To begin with, the expansion of mass productions is likely to be the most significant reason. It has long been documented that among the purposes of using water, agricultural and industrial productions account for a great deal of the usage. Since the industries in many countries, especially the developed ones, are growing rapidly, the need of water for productions skyrockets. Moreover, people's daily activities also consume more water than in the past. This is because the global population is rising rather steadily, with some nations having the annual rates of birth above 5%, which is relatively high.
In order to tackle the issue of water shortage, actions from both the governments and citizens are required. First of all, it is crucial for the authority to regulate people's use of water. For instance, families that exceed the monthly threshold of water usage would have to pay noticeably higher fees; or companies have to prove that they can efficiently ultilize the resource, otherwise they will not be permitted to operate. For individuals, people should raise their own awareness of the importance of saving water, as well as the methods to implement it. Having these measures acted on, the problem would hopefully be relieved.
All in all, water, one of the most essential resources to humans, has become inadequate due to the expanding population and the growth of agricultures and industries. Thus, people have to take a range of actions in order to ensure the sufficient water supply for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e sufficient water supply for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11445783133 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74610268974 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9608640966 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8823529412 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172437158222 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572563700427 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418451057475 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107822990617 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538039206788 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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