In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Transportation system wil be less used in the near future owing to people are more facinated to spend times indoors that leads roads are filled in vehicle passengers this has a serious impact on the surrounding environment . The process will outweight disadvantages and i will consider here.
Many people usually commute to work by their private car because it is a cheap and convenient way of travelling. However as transports pollute the air with carbon emissions , this is detrimental for human beings . Nowadays quarantine rules are strict due to COVID-19 that provided staying at home , as a result almost all the company employees worked through the social medias. Additionally , as a step to spend time wisely people have had leisure time for doing some housechores .
As the coin has two sides , Internet became more common around the world even though rural areas had an opportunity study or aware of the global happenings . Furthermore , documentary works converted into applying online that means out of usage in transport. If vehicles keep on driving the atmosphere would be filled in toxic gas that can cause shortage of oxygen . Optimists believe that driveless vehicles contribute to the nature positively as a result health of people that provides taking fresh air and improvement in life expectancy what makes more attention to our nature.
In a nut shell , I feel that the government should reduce the number of transport to return safer levels of the breathing atmosphere before some negative consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22040816327 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85204137674 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4532662291 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.272727273 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178865965112 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599935955506 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572185139078 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970309799775 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810111823001 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.