In the contemporary world, modern technologies affect on every aspect of human's life. It is true that nowadays people can easily access any online documentaries without money. However, personally, I believe that online books or references on the internet can not replace all the benefits of newspapers or books on paper. The following is presenting the reasons.
On the one hand, it is incredibly beneficial of reading online books and all kind of information on websites based on the financial reason and convenience reason. Firstly, communities consider money-consuming which they could have when they decide to choose a digital webs instead of reading on paper for other works. I mean, actually, we do not need a permission for using these kind of newspapers or books. It will be greater if we use it free when we do not pay for any kind of reference, specially, this helps so much for students who always be in the lack of income. Secondly, most part of people can read everything at everywhere, thanks to smart phone, high-tech device and the internet. For example, Students do perfectly assignments which need seeing over some book on library at a coffee store.
On the other hand, printed papers and books play importance roles in daily days. In the day and age, society likely appreciate books on paper owing to fact that it can not be detrimental to their health such as eyes, for instant. The digital screen can launch some harmful rates in particular ways which the human eyes can not realize. Moreover, because of not using the internet, we are not exposed to social media like Facebook, YouTube, ... and can focus all mind in our reading goals.
In conclusion, I heckon that whatever reading ways, each have their own unique advantages we should consider. However, I still believe that there are some benefits of books and printed magazines that can not be overtaken by online sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...contemporary world, modern technologies affect on every aspect of humans life. It is true...
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Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
..., we do not need a permission for using these kind of newspapers or books. It will be grea...
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Line 2, column 442, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'frees'?
Suggestion: frees
... books. It will be greater if we use it free when we do not pay for any kind of refe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i mean, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92211838006 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68997168892 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0573361175 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9411764706 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3529411765 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192085931993 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534146714308 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377589312302 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106404015826 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421184899404 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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