It is said that our innovative approach has not accomplished equality in gender yet, and female still have fewer opportunities to move ahead in life in comparison with male. From my perspective, I partly agree with this statement.
On the one hand, no matter how advanced the society is, some residential areas still remain inequality in gender because of the low standard of living and lack of education. A telling example is African nations in which women is exploited and hit by men. Those females have to stay at home as housewives in order to serve for males, who is regarded as breadwinner of the family. Besides that, the inner-city slum is the place where violence in the family occurs on a regular basis and girls have no right to attend formal education.
On the other hand, governments throughout the world are making a strive for achieving the equality in both genders, especially the developed nations. It can be seen clearly that nowadays, women are facilitated to study for higher education and can excel many vital elements of the society. In addition, holidays for females are organized in many places, with people giving them the best wishes and warm receptions. The political status for women has changed since the 18th century, after which females go to work and be treated as equal as males. Until now, the vital role of a woman in a family has been increased significantly.
In conclusion, although there are still some place where women are treated unfair, i believe that their role in the society has changed considerably.
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree 89
- Governments around the world are spending billions in support of space programs This money would be better spent on research into improvements in human health To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 73
- Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university to work or to travel Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage 84
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 78
- Gender equality has not been achieved in our society Women still do not have the same rights and opportunities as men To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90114068441 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69177352785 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7429091647 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192994443645 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597084338374 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421226396722 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110148855974 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346002443023 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.