Government should spend money on railways rather than roads to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
irrefutably, nowadays authorities immensely spend money on new technology in railways line rather than roads. In my opinion, I think that government should spend money on roads as much as possible because of the plethora of people prefer roadside areas as compare to railways lines.
To begin with, the lot of reasons why the government should spend money on road construction areas. first and foremost, today's abundant of people are using roads for traveling and many more purposes. such as a move from one place to another for their further education, job, and other personal work. But roads it is very poor construction and also much pit on a roadside due to this reasons lose their travel balance and Accident happened.
Moreover, the second predominant reason is if the road lines do not proper thus many drawbacks arise. Such as obstacles to travel from one to other places, increase traffic jams and also rising environmental pollution due to traffic and honking. In addition to this hance, the government should spend more money on roadside rather than railways line so people can easily move and reach their destination.
However, the government should also not neglect the railway's line because nowadays many people are using the train for the faraway places they have no any other option to choose another transportation mode so it's very easily fast and comfortable for everyone and mostly handicapped persons so the government should also spend money on their wayside.
In the recapitulation, I certainly believe that authorities should spend money on the roadside because a lot of public uses bus taxi bicycles and motor vehicles rather than train and it's also road safety for the everyone.
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...than train and its also road safety for the everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65422266571 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521428571429 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9965563915 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.818181818 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305527683433 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129581907011 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096158831589 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189520006471 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529991950728 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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