governments should spend money on railways rather than roads
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that the government should spend on railways than roadways . I disagree with this opinion because railway stations are situated at some distance from our destination and roadways create easy transportation for people.
First reason for disagreeing the statement is most of the railway station are built far from cities. after we reach the nearest station people need to hire vehicle to reach our destination our use own transportation which require road to reach places. Railways can not be constructed in between the cities and it is also difficult to provide railways services to some places. This makes people to use other mode of transportation . In recent studies it is estimated that 80% of people hire vehicle to reach railway stations
A further reason is roadways provide smooth transportation. By using road transportation people can travel shortest distances. By road people can travel using their own transportation which reduces time. There are different options for people to travel through roadways such as autos, buses and more. Roadways provide occupation for many people with increase in railways unemployment also increases. Railways are mainly used to travel long distance for short distance roadways are more efficient . According to the recent survey done by The Hindu over 60% people use roadways to travel
In conclusion I firmly believe that government should not spend more funds on railways rather than roadways. Railways are best for travelling far places . It is difficult to provide railway lines in some places where road are commonly used. Roadways ensure uncomplicated transportation for people to travel within small distances
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42366412214 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86792829753 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511450381679 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7076083183 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184924731442 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774570268282 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760421852386 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148950674748 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761898364841 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.