Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
TO what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, budgeting is one of the fundamental decisions should be taken by the governments. While some people have this conviction that more money should be allocated on constructing the railways, other believes that building the roads would be more reasonable. I will elaborate in this essay why I am a strong advocate of the first group.
First and foremost, railways have emitted less toxic gasses into the atmosphere. Undoubtedly, environmental aspect has been considered as a critical factor in decision making, particularly in large scales such as national. According to a conducted research at Harvard University, transportation industry in England produces one-fifth of total released CO2 and trains had the less contributor amongst all the facilities with only 1.4%. In addition, trains are most affordable vehicle for the citizens. The more the price will be reasonable, the more people can use it, therefore, governments should invest on the areas which have more users. In my country, if someone wants to travel by train, he should book the ticket at least 3 months in advance, if not the trip has to be postponed to another time.
To support the second viewpoint, driving on the roads are very convenient and enjoyable. Needless to say that utilizing the private car brings a lot of beneficial which should be not underestimated. People can choose the time which is suitable for themselves, stop or drive wherever they wish, and even they can bring whatever they want without any limitation.
On the basis of the points mentioned above although spending money on the road can have some advantages for the residents, it would be more rational that governments assign more budget on building a good infrastructure for the railways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'conducted research'.
Suggestion: conducted research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, as to, at least, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18727915194 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95655633918 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632508833922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5421353455 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121131684309 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398388784832 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319835303046 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767080691038 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311442808627 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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