High school working
Some people think that it is a necessity in high schools about participating the students in some social activities without paying any wages or salary to them. They believe that there are variety of tasks like helping poor and weak people, setting a better relation with neighbours around us, or improving sports abilities of youngsters.
I believe that high schools can provide a possibility for the students to deal with social issues. They have some sorts of theoretical lessons in high schools, where have less connection and effective interaction with various communities. These social services will gradually prepare a condition for them to take part in these activities, moreover, they learn how to help each other and improve their talents in society. Students do not receive any money for these jobs, so it's better they have freedom of choice to do them. These tasks ought to be done on their free times and should be performed according to their interests and abilities.
Giving help to seniors can be considered as a programme for the students. For example, there are some elderly residential houses, where its inhabitants are living there or may struggling to be alive. Students at this age are really vigorous. If they join to these centres, the seniors will be motivated to live happier and can overcome the problems. Students be trained to support old people about their health care and daily routines. They also will learn lots of things from the seniors, who have experienced ups and downs of a life. Therefore, they can make a friendly atmosphere, where is beneficial for both of them.
The other example of these services is to let the students cooperate with some skilled engineers, researchers, or different productive and expert people in industrial factories or research centres. This cooperation has some merits for both the students and employers. The students improve their knowledge and experience through co-working with industrious and experienced people. They will make a better decision for their future career about joining to universities, studying in colleges, or running their own business. Now they know about different occupations, while they have also been as a help labour at working place.
In brief, I believe that this social cooperation which are done by the students of high schools is worth for them, and I agree with this idea. However, they should be responsible to do these activities voluntarily and on their leisure times, for the main goal of them is studying and musn't be forgotten.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ilities of youngsters. I believe that high schools can provide ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, for example, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18028846154 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98660157538 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.550405039 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11527136573 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338404839137 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558603625924 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717825689256 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389235011878 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.