If you sell a product and the people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and considered as a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree ? Give an example from your experience to support your opinion.
Although sometimes it is thought that product which are already getting sold in market does not require advertising, other think that all big companies are doing some sort of advertising to boost sale and entertainment is done to ensure people watch these advertisements. I disagree, that advertisements are considered only for entertainment as they play very vital role in increasing sales and revenue for the company.
Admittedly, this is commonly believed that the companies who have monopoly in the market should not invest on advertisement. Furthermore, instead should use that amount in research and development to enhance their product features. For example, Maggie which is one of its kind product and no competitor could beat this product. In addition, if company has consumer durable product then it certainly requires advertisement to boost sale, and to on-board new customers. Moreover, world is moving at very fast pace and there is lot of transformation happening, to ensure company educate customer about new feature and enhancements, advertisement becomes must to do.
On the other hand, there are many products which does not require any advertisement, as they are necessity of customers. For instance, Indian Oil do not require advertisements to boost sale and customer by default will come and purchase product. Another significant factor is even if people remember advertisements from entertainment perspective, it still helps in increasing sales and spread awareness about the product. one of the most important factor of advertising is, people assume that company is doing well and therefore investing further in advertisements. Those company who do not do well on revenue will avoid going for any kind of advertisements like TV commercials, sponsorship and branding etc.
To conclude, some people wrongly perceive that advertisement could be waste for the product who already have good consumer base and people watch that only for entertainment. I strongly believe that advertisement contributes a lot in companies success and especially products who have more consumer base needs advertisement to ensure they do not loose customer against the competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58630952381 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21818408879 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0978527929 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.071428571 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17025464614 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066833451288 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310625478996 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113402513994 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223769265933 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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