Nowdays many business and start up are launch, they produce serveral products and the mainly reason to make a profit. This business build more manufacturer near the main head quarter or just open internationaly in serveral lower unemployer rate. The main issue of create an improve the production line is it can become the risk for the environment especially the local resources. In ths essay I will gives serveral examples, reasons and how to solve this dilemma.
This matter is up because many manufactures do not concern about the ecosistem of the planet for the future. They just want to higher their income by using the low cost as possible and the mainly demanding products. For the example many food and beverage stall use plastic for their mainly part to wrap their products. This problem begins because the price of plastic products are cheaper than the usage of paper box or the reyecle products. By this matter, the manufacturer who produces packaging prefer to create plastic wrap and essential because it has biggest demand comparing to the purchase of recycle products.
This issue could be done if serveral people or comunity gives some example of the worst impication of the usage of unenvironmentaly friendly product. For the example, the decrease population of whale because so many plastic waste in the ocean. The goverment also need to focus on giving some penalty for some companies who do not use the recycle product and they need to concern about their cycle of manucacturer production and waste.
At the end, all the element like goverment, business owner, comminity and individuals need to coorporate to decrease the usage of natural damage product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...employer rate. The main issue of create an improve the production line is it can become th...
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Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...he local resources. In ths essay I will gives serveral examples, reasons and how to s...
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...nly demanding products. For the example many food and beverage stall use plastic for...
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much food', 'a good deal of food'.
Suggestion: much food; a good deal of food
...nly demanding products. For the example many food and beverage stall use plastic for thei...
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Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the biggest'.
Suggestion: has the biggest
...e plastic wrap and essential because it has biggest demand comparing to the purchase of rec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04316546763 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64026816687 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6406930569 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158950273902 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060153230767 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468913836845 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095745387568 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118657333083 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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