There is a substancial growth in the number of people who buy things they require from online stores. While this trend has few benefits such as, it saves time and also provide a large variety of goods, it still has few drawbacks.
Firstly, purchasing from an online store saves a considerate amount of time as we need not travel and search for the items. We can order anything from sitting anywhere and within no time the order is delivered to your doorstep. As everything is available online you need not visit multiple stores to buy different items. For example, you can buy vegetables, clothes, groceries etc online rather than separately visiting each shop. This also saves the fuel needed for to and fro travelling and thus protecting the environment. Another point to consider is that, you can have a huge range of varieties to choose from. To illustrate, you can select any item of your choice from any size small to large and of any colour you wish which is technically not possible to find in an offline store. Hence it becomes easy to select and buy your desired product.
On the other hand, the major drawbacks of online shopping are the quality of the product and return policy of the store. It is often difficult to analyze the quality of cloth visible on the website or the accurate size of the shirt that will fit you. Sometimes, the product you ordered will be different from the product you received. This leads to a major dissapointment and customer disatisfaction. The other disadvantage is the process of returning an item. Different stores have different return policies for their stores. Few provide only replacements while few charge certain amount to pick up the item to be returned which takes few additional days and later if you are still not satisfied with the exchanged item, you need to compromise with it. Thus, one must be very careful with the terms and conditions of the store before they purchase anything through online.
To conclude, we can say that though we have many benefits from online shopping we cannot ignore the disadvantages occuring from the return policies and the lack of tranparency while purchasing things online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'safe'?
Suggestion: safe
...irstly, purchasing from an online store saves a considerate amount of time as we need...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he order is delivered to your doorstep. As everything is available online you need...
^^
Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...t possible to find in an offline store. Hence it becomes easy to select and buy your ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86253369272 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58770776959 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522911051213 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0079094311 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9473684211 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12968610308 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447432136516 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415911613442 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815985797819 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0087346242843 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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