Nowadays, a considerable number of highly educated personnel are moving to developed countries from their undeveloped countries. The examination of the upshots of this inclination and possible acts needed to be taken to tackle the detrimental effects for poorer countries are highlighted in this essay.
Firstly, the most serious consequences are often felt when there is a lack of required number of educated staff in undeveloped countries. This can cause a considerable decline in almost all sectors in poorer countries because all sectors are connected with each other. For deeper explanation, lack of teachers will create even less educated personnel, lack of doctors will create unhealthy public, lack of engineers will cause less safe buildings and public services. Correspondingly, due to this trend undeveloped countries become even poorer and thus more dependent on the other countries.
There are a plethora of solutions to overcome the brain drain issue. Firstly, to address its root causes, governments should focus on increasing professionals’ salaries equivalent or close to what is being paid in developed countries. By doing so they can prevent the migration of professionals for higher salaries and better life conditions. One further measure would be supporting new startups inside country with extra financial resources and low taxes. This may lead to economical resurrection and sophisticated public services controlled by creative and intellectual minds.
To conclude, it is indubitable that the problem of such complexity has no solution which is likely to change the whole scenery in a very short period. However, boosted life quality and support for newly occurring startups created by highly educated professionals is more likely to bring about positive outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60294117647 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07296645562 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1429867566 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274762955404 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824951380572 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050924547561 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146914681266 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539226446352 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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