Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the environment is facing a huge threat in daily routine. Some believe that certain practices made by people are useless whereas, governments and MNC will be making a difference. This essay will state why I disagree and will discuss how efforts will contribute to the matter. To begin with, service starts from humanity. A small effort can make a huge impact. Individuals can promote new habits in educating their friends and families about practices that can help to save the environment. Governments can still spread awareness about the recent issue that is being faced but, still, it lies in the hands of one to carry out it. A recent survey states, activities that government and private organizations involved in promoting environmental issues are not effective and has less than 25 percent of followers. On the other hand, Individuals develop the habit of following friendly practices to keep the environment. They also have set an example to others by explaining what difference can be made when everyone adapts to that practice. For example, many have started to carry cloth bags to shops to avoid plastic bags which is non-biodegradable and has eventually led to lesser production. Companies can help by planting trees around its premises and by providing contracted buses for their employees. From the above, it can be seen that individuals can set the start for an impact to keep the environment. Though companies can also make efforts it still lies on the hands of one to adapt to the practice and make difference. This essay has discussed how individuals could set an example and why I disagree with the above idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, whereas, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00366300366 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83683020818 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578754578755 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3693399567 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243874750249 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826296600636 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633070027726 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243874750249 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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