It is apparent that leadership is considered to be one of the most challenging issues for the leader. According to some of the assumptions of individuals, intelligence is said to be a necessary aspect of leadership. I do not consent to this viewpoint, and further, the other significant features are yet to be analyzed in the subsequent paragraphs.
The other components need to be considered, which seem to be lucrative for the leadership in certain ways, the first and foremost is confidence as employees get motivation, and feel comfortable, thereby working with the confident leader, despite having the difficulties. Moreover, appropriate decisiveness also links with the true leadership, whereby a leader takes decision carefully, whether it is good or not for the company’s production; therefore, it is also a necessary aspect of correct management.
To commence with, leadership with correct observation seems to bring fruitful outcome in works because observing the employees while they are working, may find out the mistakes which they are doing in their works, in the meantime, a leader can solve those mistakes for the welfare of the company as well as reputation. Furthermore, a leader needs to have sumptuous communication skills that are immensely important. To elaborate, describing and understanding the meaning of questions, which are asked in the events and other group discussions.
In conclusion, although leading to others is no easy task for being a leader, having said that the necessary qualities are a must to have for the leadership.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ing issues for the leader. According to some of the assumptions of individuals, intelligenc...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...said that the necessary qualities are a must to have for the leadership.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35627530364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25569514635 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1392839985 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115618391306 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489443745026 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331330368368 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713686020082 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029879069419 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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