International tourism has become a booming industry in the last few years. Some open minded people feel that international tourism has benefit many places while some narrow minded people argue that it has negative impact on the local residents and the environment. The advantages and disadvantages of international tourism outline below, and in this essay I will indicate the correctness of the view of open minded people.
To begin with there are various advantages of intrecnatioan tourism. Firstly, people around the globe learn the culture of the host country. By this, the host country is international recognised. Secondly, international tourism adds on to the revenue of the host county or from the welfare of their people. Finally, international tourism allows developed countries to invest on business in developing countries. This would be broaden the business prospects in the host country.
On the other hand, there are certain disadvantages of international tourism. Certain tourist contaminated to the environment in host country by littering and causing pollution. Tourist behave in such manner with an intention do not want to mingle with people in the country and also misbehave with them. However, the disadvantages could be minimised by implementing certain rules. Government could lay down strict rules on the tourism by imposing fines or penalties on those who misbehaved or try to spoil the environment in host county. Moreover, tourists should be trained to be friendly with the residents.
In conclusion, though there are few disadvantages if International tourism, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Moreover, government has the right to get itself globally exposed by means of tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52452830189 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13719971821 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1752605909 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1176470588 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301736050028 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103636214565 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090870852036 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198237510871 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757078430632 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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