Although tourism has a hugely beneficial impact on countries and cultures, it could have a wide range of disadvantages that causes consequences. This essay will spot out some of the advantages and disadvantages of tourism.
Obviously, travelling, learning about new cultures and discovering new places around the world is a great experience, but when it comes to tourism, it has pros and cons. Firstly, tourism has a high responsibility for destroying natural habitats, causing to end much wildlife. Governments are removing forests and green lands to have enough lands and space for building facilities to serve tourists. Deforestation causes pollution and increases the level of CO2 in the air. Secondly, this phenomenon, tourism, caused the local people to protest about losing their privacy in their own country.
On the bright side, tourism is one of the main reasons that help the growth of the country's economy. Rising economy leads to a rise in the individual income and governments use economic returns from behind tourism to improve the living standards of its people, for instance, they could build schools, universities and hospitals. Furthermore, tourism had increased the chances for local people to work as tour guides or work in many other fields as the country is developing. Finally, tourism had brought people from different countries, backgrounds and cultures close to each other which could be a reason behind co-operation and partnerships in business.
In conclusion, in my opinion, governments should begin to take action against tourists and place some laws to stop the consequence and prevent more from occurring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39147286822 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96619093049 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9192591189 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208184736342 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672086123074 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449136450908 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109543369219 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656727668232 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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