Every individuals now opined that internet is a good way of communication while some argued against this as an effective means of getting information.in my opinion, i agreed with former statement. Both of these will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, Internet enhanced communication because messages can be pass from one person to another without since each other. With the ways humans has been engaged laterly ,people rarely get time to see one another. But with internet nowadays, they send messages to one another and immediately reply are gotten unlike before that will have to wait for days for response to be gotten no matter how urgent the message maybe.
On the other hand,internet is not a good way of searching for information because there so many junks online.With the use of search engine online, there are misinformation if one take to them it make cost ones life. Such a case is seen when pregnant mother find information that exercise is good during pregnancy.They will now involve themselves until they loose tļhe pregnancy simply because they could read sure online.
To conclude with,conversing through online may be good for some people while some see it as not be proper as individuals can talk through it without seen physically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01421800948 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82077727565 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668246445498 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6929244032 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.25 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174784263031 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857179279009 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679106675782 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120152528422 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838257111667 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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