I agree with the first opinion and now I writing Why? Yes of course I think talent it’s the main thing in you life because without the talent doing some thing for example sport, music, science and others. So talent can be in your blood for example do you have grandfather or grandmother were also good. I have more examples sports dynasty more the sportsmans or sportwomans have in their family people who were professional hockey player or footballer, but talent it’s only the 50% successful. Because talents people quite often thinking oh I the best because somebody said me you have great talent and these people thinking I have talent and why I need to do extra work. People who were born without talent have quite hard way as people as have any talents. This people hard working and they really want to be good at sport or music.
They have hard but when they passed this very hard way they became the best in this thing they become like car which can’t be brother, for example when the Andrea Agassi was the professional tennis player he was wonderful the best in the world but all experts can’t understand how because he don’t have talent to be good tennis player but when he was child he want to be tennis player and his father support his son and house man in LA and make all the thing and comfortable for outsides and Agassi become the best.
- the table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 56
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 2002 78
- the chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began 78
- Describe a fear you had to overcome How did you overcome it 51
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
I agree with the first opinion and now I writing Why? Yes of course I think tale...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...u life because without the talent doing some thing for example sport, music, science and o...
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Line 1, column 580, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...thinking oh I the best because somebody said me you have great talent and these peop...
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Line 1, column 770, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...hard way as people as have any talents. This people hard working and they really wan...
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Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... tennis player but when he was child he want to be tennis player and his father supp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, for example, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58704453441 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28753896138 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514170040486 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.870601584 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.625 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176804058835 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925589485171 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446304103474 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131916117171 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377065727679 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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