In early age it is essential for children to master the contrast between right and wrong. Punishment is an essential part to assist them for learning the consequences. Overall i totally disagree with this due to the use of Punishment it is really not important to punish children cause the sometimes behave very sensitive and moreover punishment can cause a severe damage in terms of their growth and mental health.
Firstly, dealing with children is like a soft mind with soft skin parents and teachers should try to sort the problem with love and affection, and try to sooth them so that the can understand the consequences and can learn the way you want them to behave or study moreover violence is the worst we can imagine and specially on children which can be thought as a big crime. In this parent or teacher can be sent to jail for a certain period of time, in my opinion the good behaviour depends on parents and teacher children ought to do what they see around so if someone wants his/her children to behave well and study or whatever they want they first should ask themselves what are they so that their children can follow them as a role model.
In Contrast, it is totally not like this that i disagree but for some very crucial times it is necessary to punish the children for their mistakes to make them realise that they are on a wrong way so, they can learn the consequences for the better future and proper lifestyle, in my point of view parents and teachers are the role models so they have to urge the young generation to have the knowledge and punish them on their mistake which really can effect children life in terms of future and better career.
In Conclusion, punishment sometimes really can effect the children mind and mental health whereas it is very important to give punishment for learning the consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65749235474 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47740776113 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45871559633 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.26344213 49.4020404114 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.571428571 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.7142857143 20.7667163134 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349649446356 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188468470003 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377457176558 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227183714946 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720076808289 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.71 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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