There are necessities and significance to taking risks in professional and personal lives. However, I can only partially agree with this opinion since there are different criteria for risks and only some of the consequences of the risks people can afford, whether at work or after work. We all live only once, be brave but not arbitrary. I will elaborate on my views as follows.
First and foremost, people need to take risks. In one's career, there are lots of challenges and risks we have to confront. You have no choice but to take it and find the most suitable instead of the best solution for them. We need bravery, confidence, intelligence, and experience to handle them. There are lots of risks people have taken in history. If no people tried tomatoes for the first time, we might still recognize that this fruit is poisonous.
Moreover, Columbus was a great explorer; without his risks, the American continent may have been found hundreds of years later, which may rewrite the history of the US. On the other hand, we need to know the risks at work. It would not be advisable to do this if the risk harmed people, whomever they were. We must apply the correct standard to evaluate the danger at work, not just try it directly. If Putin would like to talk with Zeliensky about state affairs instead of the invasion of Ukraine, there would be no people in Ukraine and Russia who died in the war this year. There may be tricky trouble in Russia, but the cost of the war is much more than that is my concern. At this point, politicians' wisdom and experience should work on handling these problems, not risking soldiers' lives on the frontline.
As for people's personal lives, that is the same story when they are working. Because work and life are extensions of each other, no one can work without life and vice versa. However, people should be more prudent when planning to take risks in their personal lives since it could break their work and life. As I pointed out, people should make more specific plans to try something dangerous. The most important consideration is whether one can take the incoming result, both good and bad. Since this is our life, if we take risks in our personal lives, we may hardly recover from the accident the risk may bring. For a married man who wants to date other women for a happy life, his life would be a tragedy due to his lack of responsibility for the family, which may harm not only his wife but also the children if they have one. Here as for the children, if a new couple can not give birth to a new baby due to their health condition, they can turn to a doctor for professional help, like the tube-baby technology, this is undoubtedly a risk, but the couple can handle by the doctor's professional treatment. This is also reasonable since they are on the right track.
At last, people need to take risks at work and personally. However, people should know most of the risks' outcomes by their judgment and how to find the most feasible solution by their intelligence and experience. That is the actual value of our lives at risk.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...foremost, people need to take risks. In ones career, there are lots of challenges an...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 7.85571142285 369% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2535.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 552.0 315.596192385 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59239130435 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44338797498 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471014492754 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 786.6 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2797708244 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4137931034 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0344827586 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8275862069 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276130361028 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07915843347 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063042576346 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168251982625 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603622572732 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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