Since time immemorial, the development of technology has exerted a far-reaching impact on the popularity of traditional books. Due to grandiose data storage capacity and convenience, I expect that printed material will soon be superseded by electronic versions.
When it comes to the benefits reaped from using online tools, the virtual information stored rooms can optimize users’ experience. Customarily, so far the more books there are, the bigger the bookshelf is; on the contrary, with the development of technology, data storage can solve this problem easily. For instance, once people do not have a large house to record an enormous volume of books, the internet is considered the best solution now that expanding data in saving books is feasible after the memory capacity is extended with a tiny amount of money. Therefore, it is no exaggeration to claim that technology has offered people infinite storage space.
Another benefit of electronic devices is the convenience it brings. In this modern age, most everybody has their own smartphone or laptop side by side. It means that people can easily access or change gadgets anywhere, at any time. Moreover, people can carry one device, instead of bringing myriad books with them. For instance, if people want to drink and read books simultaneously at a coffee shop, electronic devices like smartphones can help them read books easily without carrying a bag to contain books. By this way, people can lessen the weight of their bag when going out.
In conclusion, electronic tools have played a pivotal role in human life by it’s convenience and a high datastore of devices.
- When you face a difficult problem in life what do you feel is the best way to solve it asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem finding information about the problem using the Internet taking a long time to think about the problem 80
- Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives Do you agree or disagree 83
- THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE CHANGES THAT TOOK PLACE IN THE TOWN AT THE SEASIDE RESORT OF BEACH BETWEEN 1950 AND 1990 78
- Today many countries import food from different parts of the world is this a negative or positive development 78
- The chart shows the number of visitors to a local cinema according to age in 2000
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'by its convenience'?
Suggestion: by its convenience
...ave played a pivotal role in human life by it’s convenience and a high datastore of devices.
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Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: IT_IS[16]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
... played a pivotal role in human life by it’s convenience and a high datastore of dev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18113207547 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80386754204 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9101057449 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13453816992 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447521680636 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467706152548 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071920876117 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213577188476 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.