Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.
To what extent do Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a success career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
you agree or disagree?
it would be argued by some that after graduating high school, people should apply for job. In my opinion, however it would be more benefitial for them to choosing higher education has a great opportunity to achieve.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why many people think that asking for a job instead of continuing to study has a lot of benefits. Firstly, it's favorable for them to be directly learnt and worked so that they accumulate more knowledge. this leads that their success is sooner than their peers’ s success. Another is that applying for a job instead of studying university helps them save time and money. For instant, in poor families, working helps them not only reduce financial burdan but also share family finances.
On the other hand, I would argue that students should enroll in university because for some causes, one of which is that university students have a good chance to gain in-depth industry knowlwdge, which helps them improve career level. this means that they are more attracted by recruiters so that they have more employment and higher salaries than people who do not have a degree after graduating university. For example, In Vietnam, a candidate with a degree would find it easier to get a job than people without degree. In addition, university usually supports students to do internship at big companies or give them scholarship in order to learn and exchange different cultures around the world. Therefore, studying at university plays an important role in the development of profession because of those advantages.
In the conclusion, although some people think that people should choose a job after leaving school, I personally believe that people should learn higher education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07638888889 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64698137822 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8800445995 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22281546569 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787510162439 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419990176555 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133561324609 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361193247526 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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