Lifestyles and culture in many countries is becoming similar, is it positive or negative?
It is true that nowadays lifestyles and cultures of different countries are becoming more and more likeable compared to in the past because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the World. From my perspective, I believe that this trend has both advantages and disadvantages for each country.
On the one hand, I will give some reasons to demonstrate the benefits of the countries which are a lot more similar to other countries than before. Firstly, it can build the strong relationship between people over the World. For instance, two friends coming from two different nations which have the same cultures can easily share their ideas, as they have a lot of common things to talk about like technology or food. Thus, it can narrow the gap between them. Secondly, it also reduces the adjustment difficulties people usually face when they live in a new place. To be specific, many students choose study oversea to broaden their knowledge, and they will feel more familiar because they can consume their traditional products no matter where in the world they live.
On the other hand, there are various drawbacks of this tendency. To begin with, the globalization, which makes the world looks like the global village, often causes the loss of cultures and diversity of many countries. For me, the typical cultures of countries should be conserved to create differences of every country, as Thailand with the shows of transgender models were taken place by transsexual men and woman. In addition, young generation can approach to the unsuitable cultures lead to the bad behavior. For example, more and more Indian people are getting the western culture, particularly the living style, so they wear western type clothes which are not appropriate to an Islamic country.
In conclusion, I suppose that cultures similarity in many countries will bring both negative and positive effects for their areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 603, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to study'
Suggestion: to study
...e. To be specific, many students choose study oversea to broaden their knowledge, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08571428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66181342187 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8909045372 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236516730237 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725984089227 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104763375407 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180401870664 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123194278113 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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