It is often opined by a lot that, people those who live in an another country, which speaks foreign language can lead to some major social as well as practical issues. In my opinion, i completely agree with this statement, as i beleive that, for a non native speaker it is quite difficult to cope in a new atmosphere.
To begin with, one among the major problem faced by an emigrant is the cultural shock and among that language is the prime issue that everyone has to tackle at the beginning. Without knowing the local language, there are chances that people my struggle to build up a fortune in a foreign country and they might feel like they are outcast, which will soon lead to mental health issues. In addition, without language it will be difficult to have an effective communication and also sometimes it may pave the way to miscommunication. To exemplify, hand signs and several greeting words have different meaning in different countries based on their cultural background, misusing it may leads to disputes.
Breaking the language barrier is the best way to solve majority of the problems, as it is proven that effective communication opens new opportunities for the job seekers and students. Constant communication is required in schools, colleges and office firms, inability to break this language barrier in these sectors will lead to a falied state. Peers and co-workers helps each other in difficult situations through mutual understanding, for that language is a must.
To windup, languages are the back bone of that particular country, person who moves aborad must have the ability to deal that language in a proper way, otherwise it is impossible to thrive in a new environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, as to, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96853146853 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85393731337 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.1704031303 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 142.1 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207327024289 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715391469888 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689149301357 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112729224477 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454739224966 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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