In many countries over the world use video cameras in some public places is decreased crime propotion, whereas some people think these measures restrict citizens freedom. In my opinion benefits of that increased our security are heavier than the drawbacks, as it can receive warning in advance and protects our staff instead of people lost freedom under the video cameras.
To begin with, use video cameras in public places is a great deterrent to potential thieves. Thieves will be afraid to do illegal behavior. Because it can help police easier to catch them, and then policeman can watch the camera records to fingure out what happened and receive warning in advance. For another, it can protect the personal safety of citizen and eliminat fraudulent insurance claims. Give people a security place to live.
The drawbacks of that are some people think use video cameras restrict their individual freedom and live under surveillance. It make people uncomfortable and lost their personal rights. Furthermore, in some public place is have lots of people. It’s not easy to see who is thief. Despite of these argument, I’m still think the benefit is outweigh the negative effects. It can give us a safer working environment and staff protection. People will not to nervous lost their own staff, can pay more attesion on working or entertaining.
Video cameras being reduce crime and keep us live in a safety place. Consequently, in terms of myself, the benefits of improved security by use video cameras than the drawbacks of not use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...freedom and live under surveillance. It make people uncomfortable and lost their per...
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Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'these arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; these arguments
...ot easy to see who is thief. Despite of these argument, I'm still think the benefit is ou...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...nt, I'm still think the benefit is outweigh the negative effects. It can give us a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cameras than the drawbacks of not use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, so, still, then, whereas, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12204724409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59000365178 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0554443582 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443636784064 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127063186712 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111212231275 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273339924107 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105061712124 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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