IN MANY COUNTRIES, THE NUMBER OF ANIMALS AND PLANTS ARE DECLINING. WHY DO YOU THINK IT IS HAPPENING? HOW TO SOLVE THE ISSUE?
The extinction of various species has been one of the predominant issues that national authorities are concerning about. This is due to a fact that there is a deterioration in the figure for flora and fauna in most countries. Apparently, this trend has been aggravated by natural factors- climate change - as well as human activities - deforestation. Notwithstanding the seriousness, governments have created methods to deal with the problem.
There are many prominent reasons demonstrating why this problem has cropped up. Climate change, particularly global warming, has contributed tremendously to the depletion of certain species since they cannot acclimatize instantaneously to severe weather conditions. Rising earth's temperature is also responsible for melting polar ice caps, increasing sea levels and forest fires that lead to the reduction of natural habitats and food. Apart from that, illegal logging is worth considering due to the fact that plants absorb most carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. Consequently, high amount of greenhouse gasses is able to prevent the photosynthesis process of remaining trees resulting in the diminishment of flora as well as fauna fed on natural products. Hanoi is often cited as an example as the density of birds has dived as soon as air pollution has taken place.
To gradually deal with the problem, as well as sustaining the remaining population of creatures, governments have introduced plenty of solutions. They are urging private corporations to innovate alternative sources of energy with the interference of technologies. So far, solar panels have been equipped on vehicles such as cars and trains. Moreover, they are promoting state-owned companies to generate electricity from hydro, wind, tidal and thermal energy for national grids since these are sustainable and renewable. Furthermore, governments also have established strict rules and regulations claiming that all kinds of deforestation without national permission are suspended in order to assure adequate living habitats and food for creatures. Alongside, they have funded numerous international organisations to launch several conservation areas to protect rare, unique and exotic species.
To put it simply, deforestation and climate change are the driving forces behind the lessening of animals and plants. Despite its emergency, national authorities have urged corporations to introduce environmentally friendly vehicles, simultaneously safe zones and strict rules to protect unique species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...minant issues that national authorities are concerning about. This is due to a fact that there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, furthermore, moreover, so, well, apart from, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77897574124 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24682036195 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619946091644 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3738227612 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.111111111 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0358412800194 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0122400488233 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258797688823 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0223226444032 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157014616375 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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