In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
It is clear that people could expect to live longer than ever before thanks to advances in science and technology. There are several reasons why some people argue that a nation with elderly people could create problems for society. Although there are both positive and negative consequences, I believe that there are far more benefits.
When elderly people are becoming increasingly popular in many countries, governments would have some problems in tax system. People live longer, means that there are more people are eligible to receive a pension, in other words, the more money will be used for that instead of developing infrastructures or the economy. Furthermore, young people have to look after their elderly relatives and therefore they have a burden with regard to finance.
On the other hand, an ageing population also have various benefits in developing of a nation. Firstly, although there are many people who were 60 years old or over cannot work in harmful, heavy environment like working adult, they completely do other jobs related to research and education. They are areas that need people who have vast knowledge and experiences. Therefore, these people can contribute to society with a lot of value. Moreover, elderly people also do other things like taking care of children when their parents go to work. Finally, they are a huge model for younger generations especially when they reached the success in their field. Warrant Buffet is a typical example for those people.
In conclusion, there are several problems related to an ageing population that governments have to address, I believe that there are various benefits if society has more elderly people especially experts, scientists or influencers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, in other words, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24187725632 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66711029079 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563176895307 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4476119396 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507174862759 0.244688304435 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166730100424 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971959458924 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322765452023 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371506500175 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.