In contemporary society, many individuals prefer foreign fashion than native clothes. There are some culprits lead to this trend and some detrimental consequences it brings to domestic nations.
On the one hand, this tendency could be explained by some factors. Firstly, people in less developed countries are usually influenced by richer nations. The reason is that many lifestyle in developing countries are being replaced by foreign contents due to the rise of technology such as the Internet or TV. Take my country as an example, the majority of TV programs are either from western countries or Korea so it is understandable why people are being affected by these new styles. Secondly, domestic governments are blamed for this development. The government of native countries usually put little to no effort in the conservation of traditional dress due to the enormous amount of money this could take. Therefore, in many countries, native clothes are becoming less popular and eventually being replaced by foreign clothing.
On the other hand, I believe that this trend has some negative impacts om the cultural heritage of native nations. Firstly, these western-style dresses may not be compatible with native culture. For instance, many young individuals in Vietnam are being criticized for wearing inappropriate clothes to holy places like churchs or temples. Secondly, this tendency could contribute to the loss of cultural identity in domestic country. The refusal of the youth toward traditional clothes may result in the disappearance of these styles in the future.
In conclusion, native clothing is being replaced by foreign style in many countries, and I believe that this development has detrimental impacts on domestic nations.
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- Ielts writing task 1 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'impacts'' or 'impact's'?
Suggestion: impacts'; impact's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44117647059 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94253645028 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8143360495 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230434338404 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757774422182 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390664050421 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142431827194 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385801855721 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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