In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without
employment.
What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should
be done about it?
Although a huge number of students graduates with flying colors, they were not be admitted to any places of work. As a result, causes should be investigated, and steps should be taken to solve the problem.
There is no denying that several employees pursue an inaccurate job, which is firmly opposite their major at universities. However, the lack of experience makes their curriculum vitae less potential, and therefore they cannot gain a competitive edge compared to other candidates. For example, if an economic student strives towards the position of a marketing team, the recruiter will be wary of his or her talent, causing an unfortunate elimination.
In order to alleviate the issue, effective measures should be implemented. It seems a fair suggestion that the national and local authorities should take into account organizing career orientation events, and increase the provision of vocational courses for school leavers before sitting an exam to enroll in a university. Consequently, young people can verify their instinct and capacity, putting more value on contemplating which major to pursue.
In general, assisting figures to have an appropriate job must be the government’s top priority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46808510638 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05732169305 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.739361702128 0.561755894193 132% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4632922878 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.222222222 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108713944027 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468011328164 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440435872141 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686248613526 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040399533566 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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