Compelling evidence suggests that folk food is going to change and gravitated toward new diets during time transition. This interpretation can provide us with insights into altering people's appetite and taste. In my point of view, there are multifarious causative factors involved in this trend which will be elaborated in this contentious topic.
To begin with, the most patently obvious cause is flocking immigrants to foreign countries who are extending in worldwide nations even far-away distance. More specifically, every immigrant has their own traditional custom who after accommodating in another country shares with other citizens such as traditional meals. For instance, the vast majority of newcomers struggle to find a well-paid job opportunity so that in their initial effort they tend to lead their life by selling traditional food in way of retail. Another factor should be taken into consideration is that the influx of holidaymakers, which is newly common, lead to getting acquainted with foreign meals which are another way to bring it in their traditional food. This, in turn, has a far-reaching effect on changing people's appetite and taste during the time.
In my view, we should not lose sight of the obvious importance of changing people's diet or get familiar with other cuisines. That is to say, the ever-growing population throughout the world bring about the food problem thereby impinging on food which people consume. Inextricably intertwined with other aspects of life shortage of food in a specific region of the world has a ripple effect on other parts of people' performances including changing in the diet. Apart from overpopulation in countries around the world, the development of global network like satellite channels allows people to choose some more meals which are introduced from other culture via these channels. Therefore, the benefits accruing to people from this tendency are by no means negligible.
To conclude, there are valid arguments on this controversial issue in which it is my firm conviction it could be advantageous that people get familiar with new cuisine in order to find open option eating.
- Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, becausestudents find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games andcomputer instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people say that young people can learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
- Many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars than famous people in the history of their countries What are the causes Give solutions to increase the number of people to know about famous people in history 56
- Many elderly peopleare no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, such as, in my view, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33724340176 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90771299313 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589442815249 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3920957296 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159765948782 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573415091002 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279988058978 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943565035886 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346142697069 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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