Women in many countries do not think they require to be in wedlock. Few individuals think this is because they are able to provide for them and are financially secured so, the need for marriage to fulfil these needs becomes irrelevant. I do not agree with the statement and this essay will discuss two main reasons for women to reject being in a marriage.
To begin with, marriages are not that simple anymore like the past. Nowadays, there are many legalities and agreements before marriage can take place. The prenuptial agreement states the terms and conditions and if either party in the future tries to dissolve the marriage there are consequences which both agree to in the beginning. Such consequences can cause a huge impact on the finances of both parties at times. For instance, Jeff Bezos lost half of his net worth to his wife for getting a divorce. So, people prefer to stay in a live-in relationship rather than getting married.
Furthermore, many couples do not last long these days and often divorces take place within 5 years of being married. As there is often a lack of understanding between partners which leads to being separated. For example, A study conducted by the Harvard Institute of Social Science reports that in the USA, only 50% of the marriages last for more than five years. As a result, most females prefer to stay unmarried and independent.
In conclusion, women are preferring to stay single in most of the countries, and many feel that is because of the financial independence she has got for herself in modern society. However, it is not true and in fact, women prefer to stay out of marriage due to heavy losses in case of filing for separation in court, and due to the short-lived duration of the wedding, makes it unattractive and irrelevant to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: don't
... married. Furthermore, many couples dont last long these days and often divorces...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... place within 5 years of being married. As there is often a lack of understanding ...
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...fer to stay unmarried and independent. In conclusion, women are preferring to s...
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...d independent. In conclusion, women are preferring to stay single in most of the countries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81553398058 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66682376136 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57928802589 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8881125608 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187470874273 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587415273435 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501827385867 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109994940117 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737232403546 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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