It is noticeable that the crime rate is increasing dramatically in all over the world. Although, prisoners are being experienced with difficulties in regular life in prison, but still they commit crimes year after year after releasing from prison. A range of measures could be taken to solve this problem.
There are several reasons of crime and re-offending. The major causes of crime are poverty, unemployment and lack of education. People who commit crimes often have no other way of making a living. Another reason is that the prison system, which makes the situation worse. Because the offenders mix with other criminals can be a negative influence and the lack of rehabilitation programs lead to discourage offenders from any kind of social activities. Also, a criminal record makes finding a job more difficult.
There are various actions could be taken to solve the problems described above. Firstly, the rehabilitation programs could be designed in a way that it develops the personal skills, analytical abilities, logical thinking and specific job as well. In addition, prisons should provide education or vocational training. Another way to reform the offenders is community service, which makes offenders useful in their local communities. Finally, governments and individual should help offenders in order to find the accomodation and work. The state authorities could launch a job fair for the criminals, so that they could earn money to fill their basic needs.
In conclusion, while the number of re-offenders are growing, I believe that various measures could be taken to mitigate the problems.
- The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? 61
- In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations 61
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'year after'.
Suggestion: year after
...in prison, but still they commit crimes year after year after releasing from prison. A range of measu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, still, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35294117647 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88616794347 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0998753115 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233960964298 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678294022012 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054891383739 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140102612436 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473000548705 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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