Economic growth is an important aspect for a country to develop a better life for its citizens and a better future for all. It is often argued that governments view economic development as a major goal, whereas others believe that other types of progress are just as significant for the nation. This essay will discuss the importance of other kinds of progress for the betterment of the country.
Governments tend to focus more on the financial development of a country as it plays a major role in advancing the state. Arguably, the economy is the backbone of any developed nation. Furthermore, other internal systems cannot develop completely if the financial sector is in decline. For instance, healthcare and education rely heavily on government financing and would crumble without the support of a strong economy. Thus, it is easy to see why governments place much emphasis on building a stable economy.
However, the idea that the economy is the sole factor in determining a nation's success is completely unjustified. Other aspects cannot be neglected as they all go hand in hand to move a country forward. For example, several undeveloped countries have poor education systems and rising crime rates despite having good economies. Additionally, the military and environmental policies contribute strongly to advancing a nation on today's world map. These reasons alone illustrate why the economy is not the fundamental element in defining a country's future.
In conclusion, a nation's growth depends upon several components each working in conjunction with one another. This essay discussed the significance of all kinds of progress much needed for developing a country. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the government should not only prioritize the economy but should also focus on other sectors equally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... a countrys future. In conclusion, a nations growth depends upon several components ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29310344828 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92116187202 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575862068966 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7900156316 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216243438959 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674340470501 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838701500383 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133156328035 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116037267286 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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