Thanks to the development of economics, the living conditions of people have been improved and promoted. To meet the demand of inhabitants for housing and for the sake of other industries, numerous historic areas are being disappeared to make room for high-rise buildings, manufactures or other amenities. This essay will shed light on reasons for this phenomenon and propose measures to deal with this pressing concern.
Admittedly, there are many factors contributing to the disappearance of buildings which bring various values in terms of traditional and cultural aspects. This is mainly because of the boom in population over the last 20 years, which can lead to the lack of accommodations and housing. Therefore, to address this imperative problem, the governments are forced to destroy or replace historic buildings for the purpose of residential areas. This phenomenon also arises as a result of the industrialization and modernization of society. Recently, people have a tendency to enjoy their lives through entertainment activities. To cater for the recreational requirements of dwellers, the construction of several ranges of restaurants, hotels, and malls pose an enormous thread to the existence of previous historic buildings.
Despite these reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that historic locations have a crucial role in the history of their own countries and the governments and the community have to join hand to preserve valuable buildings. Firstly, by redistribution of population as well as relocation of companies and manufactures into suburbs or outskirts, the Government can tackle the problem involving accommodation in dense-populated regions. Secondly, educational method is regarded as an effective way to raise people's awareness of traditional value of historic buildings. Thanks to these given solutions, the government can modify not only the attitude but also the behavior of citizens to protect historic buildings where people live.
In conclusion, population boom and the significant changes in lifestyle are the prominent reasons for the disappearance of historic buildings. Therefore, the government and society need to take effective measures to address this hot issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66966966967 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27314653858 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.511939613 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.866666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248563816648 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720262790064 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635223831254 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140082189349 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377312224903 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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