In today's world people more interest to visit museums and the historical exhibitions rather than the past, accordingly many galleries open their doors to the public for free while the other not, in my belief there are many benefits in charging people to visit the museums.
On the bright side, museums are collecting objects from all over the world and sometimes they have to buy those objects from private owners or governments. For example, a Private owner maybe has an antique object from a specific period like the peace of porcelain plate from China with handmade painting on it, so museum needs a month of money to buy such beautiful object from the collector or antique dealer to put them in the museum for showing to the public. In addition,
it is helping to improve society's interact with the community when they pay money to visit events in museums. For instance, famous museums like Louvre, Metropolitan or national Museum of Egypt they are not free to visit for the public they need this money to expand their collection and throwing huge galleries in order to raise money for charities like Gallas party in New York City which is through by Metropolitan museum every year.
On the negative side, people who live in a city that has a big museum sometimes avoid going to the museum because of the entrance price which in there believe it is not fair. As an illustration, people who have always been enthusiastic about free events like concerts, theater and they prefer a spend their money on something else instead pay to visit an old dusty object from the past.
In conclusion, although there are side effects on taking money for public to visiting of museums like losing people interest to art and human history, in my opinion, the benefits are more for local communities and private sector who run such a place, in order to keep them safe and appreciate the artist and history of world, people should pay money to visit the museums.
- Fossil fuel is the main source of energy In some countries the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development 95
- modern technology is changing our world .This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication. it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures. To what extent agree or disagree 73
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.Write a letter to the parents. In your letter- Explain why you would like the job- Give details of why you wo 61
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.Write a letter to the parents. In your letter- Explain why you would like the job- Give details of why you wo 67
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 294, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... like concerts, theater and they prefer a spend their money on something else instead p...
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Line 8, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reciate the artist and history of world, people should pay money to visit the mus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77581120944 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39474978505 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510324483776 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7402979455 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.375 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.375 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.375 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229538235521 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106998686745 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668142585128 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140859073654 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416521984333 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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