No one can deny, nowadays, children more keen about eat junk food rather than healthy diet. It has a many causes, but the main reason is children do have proper guidance about food. Majority of people reckon that, it is imperative for pupils education institute ought to proved the knowledge about nutrition diet. On the other hand, some people argue on opposite site of this statement. Those people think that, parents are responsible in order to give the knowledge about food. According to my perception, parents should be give the fundamental knowledge about the eating good and health food by their kids. Alongside, education institute must be kept those subject which proved the guidance about nutrition diet as well as tutor should be explain the harmful impact of junk food.
To commence with, first and foremost, parents are the first teacher of kids. Although, Numerous things children learn from their family but, as parents, they liable to feed the healthy food to their kid. If the family kept children far away from unhealthy food, as a result, child live healthy life because they eat health diet. Secondly, if parents install the habit in they child to eat healthy food from the beginning, it is beneficial for children as well as for parents.
To instance, report of world health organization claimed that, those toddlers are more healthy as mentally as well as physical who have habit to eat healthy food rather than those children who eat unhealthy food. According to my opinion, parent play the crucial role in order to healthy lifestyle of their children, because they able to install the habit of eating nutrition diet. Unfortunately, nowadays, parent do not give any attention to their child related the food which eat by their children.
Moreover, today, each and every education institute give the education related food and fitness and this subject are mandatory in the schools. Tutors also give the proper education about nutrition, vitamins, protein and many more things which is all essential for healthy body. For example, over the few decades, government applicable the low in whole schools, they must give the education about food to student, because today student do not have proper knowledge about healthy food and they give the preference to eat fast food any it become a cause of serious health issues in young age. According to my perception, mostly children learn about the healthy lifestyle from the teacher because they give the more attention to lesson teachers rather than what their parents told them.
To conclude, As a parents, they have a responsibility to give the knowledge about food to their children and must be look after child never eat the unhealthy food. But, nowadays, parents and unable to fulfill their responsibility. So, tutors must be give the guidance to students about eat healthy food and live the illness free life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2541.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 504.0 315.596192385 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04166666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45391604973 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406746031746 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5428160131 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390899838679 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144027406616 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503923722136 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257962499239 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333883423225 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.