Many people believe that reducing the speed limit is the best option for road safety improvement. Do you think there are other measures that could be in place? what are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Many may argue that the foremost solution of the secured transport system is attenuation of the speed of vehicles.
Though speed is the significant reason behind increasing road accident, I strongly believe that there are other detrimental phenomena, which is concerned with a road accident. This essay will assert both benefits and drawbacks with relevant examples.
undoubtedly, the impulse of the driver to increase the velocity of transport is a major cause of the traffic accident. If the driver abides by the rules of the speed limit, they would avoid the jeopardy of numerous street accidents. For instance, in 1993, the Canadian government took the initiative limiting the speed of the vehicle, which decreases the road accident significantly. However, there are other multifarious reasons than limiting speed, which exacerbates the road accident, should be initiated.
In my opinion, the government can take some fundamental initiative, such as the consciousness of people and license check, which is inevitable regarding this issue. Moreover, people can save by abiding the rules and regulation of traffic. To illustrate, in 2002, the Bangladesh government annihilate all the vehicles without a license, which result was amazing. In this way, the state can take some definite initiative in order to improve the safeness of the road.
In conclusion, various technic can help to enhance road safety and limiting speed is one of them. However, there is some other reason, which hinders progress, should handle more carefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
Many may argue that the foremost solution of the...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
...nd drawbacks with relevant examples. undoubtedly, the impulse of the driver to increase ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45606694561 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86022974596 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589958158996 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.254150285 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201030259234 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685377030653 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496809560123 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106283692341 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353807599119 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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