Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.To what extent do you agree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...and so on have had an enormous negative effects on both individuals and local communiti...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...besity, fatty liver and even cancer. Also addiction has been reported in many peo...
^^^^
Line 9, column 285, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
..., these type of habits have detrimental affect on personality and education. That is to s...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42469135802 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90463787778 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627160493827 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0066641731 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8636363636 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167209323074 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401534079053 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629812526477 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848308463278 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930578177962 0.056905535591 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Not only could youngsters attain conveniently, but also would discuss thoroughly.
Not only could youngsters attain conveniently, but also they would discuss thoroughly. //two sentences parallel

flaws:
5 paragraphs are enough. 2 paragraphs for the side you support more, while one paragraph for another side.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 405 350
No. of Characters: 2125 1500
No. of Different Words: 255 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.486 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.247 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.787 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 160 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 126 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 93 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.409 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.211 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.244 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.039 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5