Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society
These days many of the society believed that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. There are both advantages and disadvantages for people who decided to be part of social network sites may negatively affects its users which is gives more the drawbacks rather than the benefits for several cases.
In the one hand, the main benefit of social networking especially in this modern era is the net of citizens will informed-well and indirectly educated due to accessing information easily. It is because we can access a lot of information through every kind of social media whenever and wherever we want. Other than that, in several social network applications, they notify when a newest topic is released which we won’t be late behind about the currently information or issues. For example, the newest post in Facebook, we will get notified when it released and we can also do some discussion in comment column. As the result, indirectly we can expand our knowledge and educate our self through the social networking sites. So it is important to follow the trend which become social network user but need consideration about the bad impacts.
Differs with the benefit above, there are several demerits in social networking such as addict onto it. It is due to the frequency in using social media, more often we use then more addict we are. For instance, currently people can’t get away from their phone whose hold it almost the entire day. It is because their mindset which accessing social media will causing lack of socialization as kind as the users have their own world. Badly, it can damage the real social life. So there is no doubt that using social media will give more bad impacts such as damage our social life aspect.
In conclusion, from right here I stand that I believe that become social networks user will damage our social life. In my opinion, it gives more undesirable impacts rather than the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... network applications, they notify when a newest topic is released which we won&a...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...ndset which accessing social media will causing lack of socialization as kind as the us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92899408284 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55598015595 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53550295858 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.205278788 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333064931736 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119995832185 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179556787188 0.0667982634062 269% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243678548648 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194620091219 0.056905535591 342% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.