Its true that gap between rich and poor is increasing day by day. Rich people have lots of money they invest money generated from one business to another. Which ultimately increases their income. Rich people knows very well to utilize and manage their money. Rich people higher peoples to work in organisation, to get more ideas from them. Hired people get well paid.
Where as poor people poor people barely manage to earn enough for their daily expences. They don't have money to work as interpreneur. Bank denies to give loan as they don't have any mortgage. So they never think to start any buisness. they find job and fail to try for anything new. As poor people keep completing daily needs and fail to save money for future. he spends all salary on needs. This things increases gap between rich and poor people.
To overcome this problem our government must come forward to solve this problem. Firstly rich people should pay more taxes than poor people. So that government can use this money for poor people. There are many children and people keeping wish to learn but financial crises avoid them doing it. Children start to work in early age. Job and business oriented education or courses should make free for them. Interest free loan should be provided to group of poor people to start a business.
There are many rich people who help poor people by providing scholarship and free education. Ratan Tata, an Indian industrialist worked lot for poor people. His trust gives gives opportunity to all poor people. There are some NGO's they give free career oriented courses for poor. Many educational institutes in India ask for donation one giving donation gets admission and middle class students having caliber fail to take admission. Government must keep strict eye on them.
We have to try from both rich and poor side so together we can have better community to live in otherwise day by day this gap will keep on increasing.
- TP0 40 - Integrated 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80239520958 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27956608332 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538922155689 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8949692034 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.2857142857 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9285714286 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.03571428571 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348872463826 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100778977765 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096587369447 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207236791589 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693215187558 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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