In many places it is observed that prisons are overcrowded and goverment didnt have enough funds to maintain them. Also when criminals complete their tenure often gettign ended upback in proson again.The main reason for this is lack of awareness for job opportunities among them. However prison works for those with a serious criminal offence. From my perspective offenders should be rehabilated in soceity.
Firstly ,it's a tough task for them to find a job in the outside world due to their criminal records ,which ends them up in unemployment and getting them back in commiting offence in order to feed themselves. ALso the soceity acceptence rate as an individual for them decreases which lowers their self esteem and results in hatred toward people. Secondly no proper training in terms of technology is provided in prison for the ofenders, so that they can be equipped with the necessary skills which makes them capable to earn their lively-hood outside the prison . Futhermore while living inside the prison they end up in getting with the people with similar criminal mindset .
however Prison set's an excellent example for those with the serious criminal offences like murder, robbery or sexual assault and abduction in which criminals are either sentenced to death or the duration of their punishment is much longer and in addition to that they are made to pay huge amount of fine with regards to the sevearity of their crime. it is necessary to maintain law and order in soceity and one should think twice in commiting such kind of crimes. However government should make the necessary steps towards various training programs or basic skills which would enable criminals to acquire necessary skills to survive outside of prison.
To conclude with prison is a place to give punishment to the criminals to abide them by laws ,but goverment needs to make necessary steps in terms of their employment and livelyhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09119496855 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55624044925 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.507679889 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.916666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254047417136 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106678523007 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522578138555 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161401477479 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605201042099 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.