Education is the most important to achieve better future and nowadays, more than 20 percent of students prefer to take foreign school. Most learners believe there are several problems when studying abroad. However, it also has a positive impact. From my opinion, I agree with this statement.
Students travel overseas to study at a reputable universities. They expect to attain the better job opportunities after graduate from this educational institution. Based on my experience, 3 of 5 friends already accepted in the international companies with high salary after finish from well-known university in the UK. Therefore, by enrolling in the foreign universities help learners easily to get the best job prospect.
On the other and, stay away from home can be challenging for a few students. A lot of differences culture can make the feel homesick and miss their hometown. For instance, my friend who studied in University of Oxford said that she always cried for one month when she fristly come to England. She was difficult to adapted because she needed to do all the household worked by her own. Consequently, going overseas also has the drawbacks and need some hardwork to adapted.
In conclusion, by learning in other countries has such benefit and obstacle that students need to consider. Each students require to know the reason and discover the goal to achieve before they choose the exact place to study, especially in the unusual countries.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'university'?
Suggestion: university
...travel overseas to study at a reputable universities. They expect to attain the better job o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...bstacle that students need to consider. Each students require to know the reason and...
^^^^
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: knowing
...need to consider. Each students require to know the reason and discover the goal to ach...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16455696203 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83879398134 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675105485232 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0024761029 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208793574376 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589510098105 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427676343128 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106319465237 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036183478481 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'university'?
Suggestion: university
...travel overseas to study at a reputable universities. They expect to attain the better job o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...bstacle that students need to consider. Each students require to know the reason and...
^^^^
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: knowing
...need to consider. Each students require to know the reason and discover the goal to ach...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16455696203 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83879398134 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675105485232 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0024761029 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208793574376 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589510098105 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427676343128 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106319465237 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036183478481 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.