The media should include more stories which report good news. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that social media should insert more stories about positive news when it on the air. Personally, I totally agree with the view expressed in the statement.
In modern social media, the propaganda of bad news is becoming popular on YouTube or Facebook. This news is attracting more and more people's attention. Some websites always show lots of pictures of wars, for examples, which will affect the psycho of pessimistic people, especially children. In 2015, the web page "www. MLNews. com" posted dozen of people's dead photos in civil wars of the Middle East which haunted thousands of people around the world. Besides that, the number of radio airs or Facebook pages usually release a lot of hate speech in order to attack religious and cultural community. From 2014 to 2016, some Facebook owners share a video about ISIS that is a terrorist group to attack Hebrew belief.
Therefore, the good news has to include in the media instead of pessimistic news. Firstly, positive news always impacts on public morale. For example, the hope in our society will absolutely strengthen if they know that scientist's breakthrough an innovative way to treat chronic disease like cancer. Secondly, optimistic ideals such as blood donation, a charity for children in ethnic minorities will always give us a warm heart. In 2017, VTV1 given the miracle news that ten people donated enthusiastically their blood to have enough eleven units of blood which saved the life of a pregnant woman.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the opinion given that enthusiastic news should be reported on social media.
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| 2020-01-30 | sepide1367 | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | martinestefan | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Com&apos
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Message: Use simply: 'a dozen'.
Suggestion: a dozen
...age 'www. MLNews. com' posted dozen of peoples dead photos in civil wars of...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'scientists'' or 'scientist's'?
Suggestion: scientists'; scientist's
...absolutely strengthen if they know that scientists breakthrough an innovative way to treat...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich saved the life of a pregnant woman. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1358490566 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61189327348 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.536424837 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249262064601 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817699777716 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092930652792 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167480381923 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562886947615 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.