The media should include more stories which report good news. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Many people believe that social media should insert more stories about
positive news when it is on the air. In my opinion, I agree with the view
expressed in the statement. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">In information technology social, the propaganda of bad news is becoming</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">popular on several social media and it will cause detrimental effects on
communities. On the one hand, some websites always show many pictures of wars
which will affect the psycho of pessimistic people, especially children. For
example, in 2015, an anonymous YouTube site posted dozens of people's dead
photos in civil wars of the Middle East which haunted thousands of people
around the world. On the other hand, the number of radio airs or Facebook pages
usually release a lot of hate speeches to insult religious and cultural
community. From 2014 to 2016, some Facebook owners shared hundreds of clips
about ISIS, which is a terrorist group in Syria, to attack the Hebrew belief. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">Therefore, good news should include in the media instead of pessimistic</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">news. Firstly, positive news always impacts on public morale. For instance, the
hope in our society will be strengthened if they know that an innovative
breakthrough, in medication, to cure chronic diseases such as cancer. Secondly,
optimistic ideals will always give us a warm heart such as blood donation
activities saved hundreds of the lives or charities for children in ethnic
minorities. In 2017, Vietnam national television gave miracle news that ten
people donated enthusiastically their blood to have enough eleven units of
blood which saved the life of a pregnant woman when she labored. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt; text-align: start;">In conclusion, I strongly agree with the given opinion that more</span></p><span style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">enthusiastic news should be reported on social media.</span><br>
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-30 | sepide1367 | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | martinestefan | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | kiana | 61 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | Niusha | 56 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | lydunhien | 61 | view |
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- The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six differentcountries over a twenty-year period. 56
- The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. 56
- The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999and 2008. 56
- Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the oldhouses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom tobuild houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3387.0 1615.20841683 210% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 8.64030612245 5.12529762239 169% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.2603035217 2.80592935109 330% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525510204082 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 872.1 506.74238477 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.60771543086 137% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 276.030933754 49.4020404114 559% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.25 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0619227626621 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030809896855 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212539808587 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0224278864411 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029307358019 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.6 13.0946893788 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.76 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.9 11.3001002004 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 33.42 12.4159519038 269% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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