Many people have higher education now, more people who are than bachelor than before. In my city, i find poor people always get married earlier and prefer to have children. But people who have doctorate degrees rarely have children. This is a true fact, this is why Japan, China and some other countries are entering an aging society. There are so many reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, there are some explanations about why many people who are educated decided to have children at a later age. They think work is better than having children. When they have higher salaries, and their education level is also higher, they will want to have children at a later age. They worried they would not have more money to burden the tuition and living expenses for children. For some poor people, they want to have more children and make these children to help them work. Such as my grand-grandparents, they have eight children and are very poor. My grandparents have three children and now, my mother and I do not always want children at a later age. In my view, children are a burden. We must be responsible for them. Only when I can bring them happiness and better education can I have children.
Secondly, from some reasons of history, people went through World War I and World War II, these experiences make most people poor and most poor people choose to have children earlier. Children need to help adults do farm work. We are living in a peaceful age, most people have higher degrees and people live longer than before.
To sum up, people living standard and the life expectancies than before. These are some decision factors that make more people decide to have children at a later age than in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... than bachelor than before. In my city, i find poor people always get married ear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6897689769 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39153947386 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465346534653 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1139573389 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.05 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429547220372 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146817170908 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928204134083 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296509673996 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567244143176 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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