Since a decade ago, the number of animals and plants drop significantly in many countries due to two main reasons which are human activities and natural events. This essay will explain in detail those and give solutions to solve this problem.
one of the main reasons for extinction is global warming. This environmental problem is caused by human activities such as deforestation activities that switch the function of the green area into industrialization and free land space for farming. Consequently, the rise in the earth’s temperature damages the large scale of the ecosystem which is the habitat for species of faunas and floras. In addition, global warming affects the increasing sea level that endangers the habitat of sea creatures, birds, and mangrove plants near the coastal line.
Besides human activities, natural events also play a crucial role through the extinction of species such as bushfires, drought, and floods. When the original habitat is destroyed, the number of animals and plants that cannot live in the original habitat brings them into extinction due to failure to adapt to a new habitat.
Conserving animals and plants could be the best way to protect them from extinction. Because of human activities and natural disasters, releasing regulation and agreement over the world to be aware of the habitat of animals and plants is the solution. In addition, the identification and listing of threatened species could be another way to protect those with extra treatment by supporting the way these species do reproduction and adaptation.
In conclusion, the extinction of species over the world is caused by human activities and natural disasters so that by conserving and preserving those species, the ecosystem will be not only stable and will protect the species from extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30795847751 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90481080126 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498269896194 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0072843382 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162969324249 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586128745507 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305880358708 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929436709253 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312635153835 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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