The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Science has had an impact on the whole of humanity, since the moment it was born. It is argued that the development of people's lives should be the prioritized purpose of science. I completely agree with this opinion.
Science is growing rapidly to serve many demands of us in life. Our life relates to many things and problems, such as health, education, and entertainment. We always ask for more and science makes our life easier by always discovering new things, changing impossibilities into possibilities. For example, during the Covid-19 pandemic, lots of scientists searched for months to find out vaccines saved people. In addition, more technological tools are used in schools to encourage students to study more effectively.
Another point to remember is that the existence of science can contribute to the development of agriculture, which is the main income of some nations. For example, more and more farmers are replacing the old methods of planting, which pollute the environment with scientific ideas to increase productivity, therefore, they can have stable incomes, as well as protect the environment. Green agriculture is now a trend in the world. Scientists are carrying out much research to progress in this field.
In conclusion, science should always focus on improving people's lives due to the fact that science affects our lives and can change them to be better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23214285714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97223546737 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6034589645 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185641829785 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656737239171 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839987669332 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142313792256 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105110762346 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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