There is no denying that, technology is flourishing day by day. At the same time, population of our country also growing high and because of this whoever, is rich they want luxurious life for their entertainment and buy redundant things e.g. motorbikes and cars. Similarly, those who are impoverished and living in the outer skirts of the city they are in need of vehicle for the sake of their family and sustenance.
However, traffic is one of the crucial issue to be noted because of this environment gets polluted as well as human being also are affecting with serious problems like asthma, lungs related ailments, sinus etc. In the global warming pivotal contributing factors are humans, we are destroying our planet. In the vast cities traffic is a major trouble, people from the other town or villages migrates to mega cities to earn, and another factor is frequently, mans uses different modes of transport to thrive the economy. To my way of thinking, government should have strict law regarding, that any person can own up to two vehicles only and encourage them to travel through public transport. When it comes to, tourism there also people should only use public transport to visit any places to avoid excess traffic.
Lets have look on possible solutions, Firstly, minimize the own mode of transports. Secondly, authorities should ban owning more than two vehicles.
In the conclusion, traffic is the main causative factor of health related problems. So, we must take it seriously for our future and to live healthy on earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62770116502 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3389420285 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110295074778 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351146200152 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418484663118 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583409897441 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234964780664 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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